=^^= This is sweet. But if I may, I'd like to point out a few things... (hope you don't mind)
I've made the corrections in red.
the day we met it was love at
[first] sight
the
first kiss was ever so sweet
I thank God for putting you in my life everyday
to me it was faith to
meet
looking up into the stars above
thanking my lucky
stars that i have you
(I didn't really understand this line to be honest)
waiting till the day we marry
in my eyes it will aways be just us two
i look up at the clouds and i see your face
just
hoping to see you again soon
missing you ever so badly
tears fall down looking at the moon
(the line might make more sense if you say something like, "tears fall down my face as I look at the moon.")
holding you in my arms brings me at ease
love the feeling that
you're so close
the feeling, the
touch i miss it so
what can i say i miss you most
(maybe find a different way to word this like, "What can I say? I miss you the most.")
I'm not trying to discourage you, I just wanted to point out the grammatical mistakes, if you fix all that then this is a very nice love poem. :]
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